Merge lp:~randall/avaneya/rr01 into lp:avaneya

Proposed by Randall Ross
Status: Merged
Approved by: Kip Warner
Approved revision: 191
Merge reported by: Kip Warner
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Proposed branch: lp:~randall/avaneya/rr01
Merge into: lp:avaneya
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Documentation/Contributors/Handbook/Preface/Preface.tex (+2/-2)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~randall/avaneya/rr01
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Randall's preface edits.

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Kip Warner (kip) wrote :

Excellent Randall. Nice work.

review: Approve

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=== modified file 'Documentation/Contributors/Handbook/Preface/Preface.tex'
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8Avaneya is a cerebral science fiction game targeted towards users of the GNU operating system.\footnotecite[gnu_users_who_have_never_heard_of_gnu] This guide is intended for Avaneya's ever growing community of contributors who would like to get involved in this very exciting project.8Avaneya is a cerebral science fiction game targeted primarily towards people who enjoy the Ubuntu operating system (which is based on GNU).\footnotecite[gnu_users_who_have_never_heard_of_gnu] This handbook is intended for Avaneya's ever-growing community of contributors who would like to get involved in this very exciting project. This is not a guide for people that simply want to play Avaneya. For information on actual game play, please refer to our Avaneya Player Manual.
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10This document will likely continue to be revised and improved with time. Therefore, because it is a living document, it is probably better to pass on a direct \href{\LatestHandbookURL}{link} to the most current revision within our project's set of blueprints than it is to give another a potentially outdated local copy. We will discuss blueprints further later in \in{section}[Blueprints].10This document will likely continue to be revised frequently and improved with time, especially when this project is in its early stages. Therefore, because it is a living document, it is better to pass on a direct \href{\LatestHandbookURL}{link} to the most current revision within our project's set of blueprints than it is to give another a potentially outdated local copy. We will discuss blueprints further later in \in{section}[Blueprints].
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12This handbook has several purposes:12This handbook has several purposes:
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