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[Randall Ross]

Randall's preface edits.

[Kip Warner (kip)]

Excellent Randall. Nice work.

review: Approve

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 % Preface...
 \StartChapter{Preface}
 
-Avaneya is a cerebral science fiction game targeted towards users of the GNU operating system.\footnotecite[gnu_users_who_have_never_heard_of_gnu] This guide is intended for Avaneya's ever growing community of contributors who would like to get involved in this very exciting project.
+Avaneya is a cerebral science fiction game targeted primarily towards people who enjoy the Ubuntu operating system (which is based on GNU).\footnotecite[gnu_users_who_have_never_heard_of_gnu] This handbook is intended for Avaneya's ever-growing community of contributors who would like to get involved in this very exciting project. This is not a guide for people that simply want to play Avaneya. For information on actual game play, please refer to our Avaneya Player Manual.
 
-This document will likely continue to be revised and improved with time. Therefore, because it is a living document, it is probably better to pass on a direct \href{\LatestHandbookURL}{link} to the most current revision within our project's set of blueprints than it is to give another a potentially outdated local copy. We will discuss blueprints further later in \in{section}[Blueprints].
+This document will likely continue to be revised frequently and improved with time, especially when this project is in its  early stages. Therefore, because it is a living document, it is better to pass on a direct \href{\LatestHandbookURL}{link} to the most current revision within our project's set of blueprints than it is to give another a potentially outdated local copy. We will discuss blueprints further later in \in{section}[Blueprints].
 
 This handbook has several purposes:
 

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