Code review comment for lp:~steven.richards/kubuntu-docs/lucid

> line #8 - IIRC, there was already a discussion about this quite sometime ago.
> The word "makes" is in regard to the word "team" which is singular and hence
> "makes" is appropriate.
>
> line #20 - "Kubuntu" will be shown twice with this change.
>
> line #21 - Changing from variable string to fixed string "Kubuntu" might not
> be appropriate.
>
> line #47 - Just a typo - should be "piece" instead of "pieace"
>
> line #61 - The comma after the word "Windows" is not required
>
> lines #127 & 128 - I guess "&menuk3b;" does the same thing as suggested by
> Steven
>
> line #209 - Just my opinion, but the word "similar" is more appropriate than
> "depicted" as it is possible that the user might see a little different
> dialogue box
>
> line #331 - Again just my opinion, but the word "similar" is more appropriate
> than "close to".
>
> lines #339-346 - Is that the place holder for the section on IRC? In that
> case, it would be inappropriate to delete them from the oneiric version right
> now as someone might take up writing that section.
>
> line #363 - the "s" in "Services" should NOT be capital
>
> line #373 - why is the word "and" not required?
>
> line #472 - KDE games are not installed when installing Kubuntu using any
> installation media. That is why DVDRom is specifically mentioned and the next
> sentence differentiates between DVD and CD installation media.
>
> line 494 - why comma after the word "text"?
>
> lines #548-550 - why specific references to 10.04. The user might not have
> even seen 10.04 version.
>
> line #573 - Again "Kubuntu" will be repeated in final output.
>
> @Steven - Your attention to details is appreciated! :)

Hi Nitesh,

In regards to your comments, some of my edits are wrong but let me explain a few of your requests to fix:

#61,#373, #494, : Lists are done in the following format: X, Y, and Z. There is always a comma between and and the prior item in the list when there is 3 items. When it is more than three you do not use "and" and simply list: X, Y, Z, A, B.

#472 : I was mistaken as you can take the DVD Image as an ISO and flash it via a USB drive which would ideally be the same media.

#573, #20: Misread the line, whoops ;-)

#47: Typo, will fix, as for the rest I will also look into.

Thanks for your feedback