Merge lp:~smartgpx/bzr-explorer-website/proofing2 into lp:~ian-clatworthy/bzr-explorer-website/trunk

[David Roberts]

[David Roberts (smartgpx)]

Minor typographical changes suggested as a result of working through the draft Open Source Development tutorial.

The whole process was 'dog fooded' by using the process described therein to prepare this proposed branch. Feedback on how well I have honoured that process will be welcome.

=== modified file 'en/tutorials/open-source-dev-gnome.txt'
--- en/tutorials/open-source-dev-gnome.txt	2009-11-27 06:31:55 +0000
+++ en/tutorials/open-source-dev-gnome.txt	2009-11-27 16:25:22 +0000
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 For convenience, the Launchpad mirror branches and merge proposal
 system are used.  Almost any open source project can leverage the
 tools shown without needing to explicitly switch to Bazaar and Launchpad.
-The tools can also be used for commerical development projects.
+The tools can also be used for commercial development projects.
 Details on how projects can hook into Launchpad and encourage
 casual contributors using Bazaar Explorer are given at the end
 of this document.
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/dialog-configuration.png
 
 Close the dialog.
-Select **Preferences** to personalize Bazar Explorer. Select the
-extended toolbar.
+Select **Preferences** to personalize Bazaar Explorer. Select the
+expanded toolbar.
 
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/dialog-preferences.png
 
@@ -95,9 +95,10 @@
 
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/dialog-init-repo.png
 
-Accept the defaults by clicking **OK**. The Branch dialog will be
-presented once more. Adjust the destination directory to ``trunk``
-within the repository directory, e.g. ``Projects/emacs/trunk``.
+Accept the defaults by clicking **OK**. Close the Initialize dialog. 
+The Branch dialog will be presented once more. Adjust the destination 
+directory to ``trunk`` within the repository directory, 
+e.g. ``Projects/emacs/trunk``.
 
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/dialog-branch-from-master2.png
 
@@ -114,7 +115,7 @@
 Open the locally created emacs repository and view the current
 list of branches. To do this, select :menuselection:`File --> Open`
 and enter ``Projects/emacs`` or whatever directory for the repository
-you previously entered. Click on ``trunk`` to view it's recent history.
+you previously entered. Click on ``trunk`` to view its recent history.
 
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/page-emacs.png
 
@@ -148,7 +149,7 @@
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/dialog-branch-feature.png
 
 This may take a few seconds because a completely new working tree
-is being created. When it completes, close the dialog and a page for
+is being created. When it completes, close the Branch dialog and a page for
 the new branch will be opened.
 
 .. image:: screenshots/gnome/page-feature-initial.png
@@ -174,7 +175,7 @@
 
 You have now saved your changes to the local repository. If you
 wish, you can make additional changes and commit them locally
-by repeating the steps above.
+by repeating the Edit and Commit steps above.
 
 
 Proposing a change
@@ -211,7 +212,7 @@
 Select **OK**.
 Pushing your feature branch to Launchpad should generally be pretty
 quick as only the new revisions are sent. When the transfer completes,
-close the Branch dialog. An indicator should now appear in Explorer's
+close the Push dialog. An indicator should now appear in Explorer's
 status bar (bottom right hand corner) telling you that the branch is
 known on a hosting site.
 
@@ -240,7 +241,7 @@
 
 .. note::
 
-   It's a good idea for your community to subscribe it's developer
+   It's a good idea for your community to subscribe its developer
    mailing list to Launchpad's trunk mirror. Merge proposals will
    then be automatically emailed to the list while remaining
    browsable online. See the end of this document for details on