Merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix into lp:ubuntu/oneiric/tellico

Proposed by Paul Stewart
Status: Rejected
Rejected by: Martin Pitt
Proposed branch: lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix
Merge into: lp:ubuntu/oneiric/tellico
Diff against target: 109 lines (+44/-41)
1 file modified
debian/control (+44/-41)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Stefano Rivera Disapprove
Ubuntu branches Pending
Review via email: mp+75830@code.launchpad.net

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* Reformatted the description to include a list of the application features, rather than having them listed in one long sentence.

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I changed the formatting of the long sentences in the description into bullet point lists.

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Stefano Rivera (stefanor) wrote :

Thanks for this, your descriptions read much better than the original.
Please forward this change to Debian, that is the best place for this to be fixed. I don't like diverging from Debian, simply for a package description.

review: Disapprove

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27. By Paul Stewart

* Reformatted the description to include a list of the application features, rather than having them listed in one long sentence.

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=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control 2011-04-11 20:27:14 +0000
+++ debian/control 2011-09-16 23:16:47 +0000
@@ -12,19 +12,20 @@
12Architecture: any12Architecture: any
13Depends: tellico-data (= ${source:Version}), tellico-scripts, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}13Depends: tellico-data (= ${source:Version}), tellico-scripts, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
14Recommends: khelpcenter414Recommends: khelpcenter4
15Description: collection manager for books, videos, music15Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc
16 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for16 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
17 books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading17 .
18 cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited18 Tellico capabilities include:
19 user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any19 .
20 property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for20 * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
21 printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It21 * automatically formatted names,
22 can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,22 * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
23 BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,23 * ISBN validation,
24 or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.24 * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
25 .25 * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
26 The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.26 * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
27 It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.27 .
28 Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
2829
29Package: tellico-data30Package: tellico-data
30Architecture: all31Architecture: all
@@ -33,20 +34,21 @@
33Depends: kdelibs5-data, ${misc:Depends}34Depends: kdelibs5-data, ${misc:Depends}
34Recommends: tellico35Recommends: tellico
35Suggests: python36Suggests: python
36Description: collection manager for books, videos, music [data]37Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc [data]
37 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for38 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
38 books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading39 .
39 cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited40 Tellico capabilities include:
40 user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any41 .
41 property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for42 * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
42 printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It43 * automatically formatted names,
43 can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,44 * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
44 BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,45 * ISBN validation,
45 or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.46 * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
46 .47 * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
47 The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.48 * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
48 It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.49 .
49 .50 Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
51.
50 This package contains the architecture independent files, such data files and52 This package contains the architecture independent files, such data files and
51 documentation.53 documentation.
5254
@@ -57,20 +59,21 @@
57Replaces: tellico-data (<= 1.3.1-2)59Replaces: tellico-data (<= 1.3.1-2)
58Recommends: tellico60Recommends: tellico
59Suggests: python, ruby61Suggests: python, ruby
60Description: collection manager for books, videos, music [scripts]62Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc [scripts]
61 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for63 Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
62 books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading64 .
63 cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited65 Tellico capabilities include:
64 user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any66 .
65 property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for67 * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
66 printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It68 * automatically formatted names,
67 can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,69 * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
68 BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,70 * ISBN validation,
69 or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.71 * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
70 .72 * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
71 The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.73 * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
72 It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.74 .
73 .75 Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
76.
74 This package contains the scripts to import data from external sources, such77 This package contains the scripts to import data from external sources, such
75 as websites. As the format of the data may change, these scripts are provided78 as websites. As the format of the data may change, these scripts are provided
76 as a separate package which can be updated through debian-volatile.79 as a separate package which can be updated through debian-volatile.

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