Merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix into lp:ubuntu/oneiric/tellico

Proposed by Paul Stewart
Status: Rejected
Rejected by: Martin Pitt
Proposed branch: lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix
Merge into: lp:ubuntu/oneiric/tellico
Diff against target: 109 lines (+44/-41)
1 file modified
debian/control (+44/-41)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/tellico/852247-Formatting-Fix
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Stefano Rivera Disapprove
Ubuntu branches Pending
Review via email: mp+75830@code.launchpad.net

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* Reformatted the description to include a list of the application features, rather than having them listed in one long sentence.

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I changed the formatting of the long sentences in the description into bullet point lists.

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Stefano Rivera (stefanor) wrote :

Thanks for this, your descriptions read much better than the original.
Please forward this change to Debian, that is the best place for this to be fixed. I don't like diverging from Debian, simply for a package description.

review: Disapprove

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27. By Paul Stewart

* Reformatted the description to include a list of the application features, rather than having them listed in one long sentence.

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1=== modified file 'debian/control'
2--- debian/control 2011-04-11 20:27:14 +0000
3+++ debian/control 2011-09-16 23:16:47 +0000
4@@ -12,19 +12,20 @@
5 Architecture: any
6 Depends: tellico-data (= ${source:Version}), tellico-scripts, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
7 Recommends: khelpcenter4
8-Description: collection manager for books, videos, music
9- Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for
10- books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading
11- cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited
12- user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any
13- property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for
14- printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It
15- can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,
16- BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,
17- or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
18- .
19- The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.
20- It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.
21+Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc
22+ Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
23+ .
24+ Tellico capabilities include:
25+ .
26+ * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
27+ * automatically formatted names,
28+ * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
29+ * ISBN validation,
30+ * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
31+ * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
32+ * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
33+ .
34+ Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
35
36 Package: tellico-data
37 Architecture: all
38@@ -33,20 +34,21 @@
39 Depends: kdelibs5-data, ${misc:Depends}
40 Recommends: tellico
41 Suggests: python
42-Description: collection manager for books, videos, music [data]
43- Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for
44- books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading
45- cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited
46- user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any
47- property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for
48- printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It
49- can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,
50- BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,
51- or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
52- .
53- The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.
54- It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.
55- .
56+Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc [data]
57+ Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
58+ .
59+ Tellico capabilities include:
60+ .
61+ * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
62+ * automatically formatted names,
63+ * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
64+ * ISBN validation,
65+ * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
66+ * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
67+ * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
68+ .
69+ Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
70+.
71 This package contains the architecture independent files, such data files and
72 documentation.
73
74@@ -57,20 +59,21 @@
75 Replaces: tellico-data (<= 1.3.1-2)
76 Recommends: tellico
77 Suggests: python, ruby
78-Description: collection manager for books, videos, music [scripts]
79- Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for
80- books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading
81- cards, and wines, and also allows custom collections; with unlimited
82- user-defined fields allowed. Automatically formatted names, sorting by any
83- property, filters, automatic ISBN validation and full customization for
84- printing or display through XSLT files are some of the features present. It
85- can import CSV, RIS, BibTeX, and BibTeXML files; and export CSV, HTML, BibTeX,
86- BibTeXML, and PilotDB. Tellico can also import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB,
87- or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
88- .
89- The files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for database server.
90- It also makes it easy for other softwares to use the Tellico data.
91- .
92+Description: A collection manager for books, videos, music, etc [scripts]
93+ Tellico is a collection manager for KDE. It includes default collections for books, bibliographies, comic books, videos, music, coins, stamps, trading cards, and wines.
94+ .
95+ Tellico capabilities include:
96+ .
97+ * creation of user-defined custom collections with unlimited fields,
98+ * automatically formatted names,
99+ * sorting and filtering by any field or property,
100+ * ISBN validation,
101+ * full customization for printing or display through XSLT files,
102+ * import and export of CSV, RIS, BibTeX and BibTeXML files,
103+ * import data from Amazon, IMDb, CDDB or any US-MARC compliant z39.50 server.
104+ .
105+ Tellico files are stored in XML format, avoiding the need for a database server, and allowing other software applications to use the data.
106+.
107 This package contains the scripts to import data from external sources, such
108 as websites. As the format of the data may change, these scripts are provided
109 as a separate package which can be updated through debian-volatile.

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