Code review comment for lp:~mterry/unity8/tutorial-redesign

+ i18n.tr("Hover your mouse on the right edge to view your open apps") :
+ i18n.tr("Short or long swipe from the right edge to view your open apps")

I know those have been given by design, but gotta point out some errors:
- In windowed mode, you need to push the mouse against the right edge and even overcome some resistance. Hovering is not enough.
- While at it, we might want to ask back on short swipe one too, but I guess that would be ok to oversimplify it in this case.

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+ text: d.landscape ? i18n.tr("Swipe from the top right edge to open the notification bar")
+ : i18n.tr("Swipe from the top edge to open the notification bar")

this might needs a windowed mode special case too. We don't want to encourage clicking with a mouse so the indicators can also be revealed by clicking the icons. Although this is not wrong. If you have a touch screen too, you can also swipe then on a desktop.

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+ text: i18n.tr("Swipe from the left edge to open the launcher")

same as for the right edge. With a mouse, it requires pushing towards the edge. Why not special cased here?