Merge lp:~mistrynitesh/kubuntu-docs/fixes-678098 into lp:kubuntu-docs/natty

[Nitesh Mistry]

Fixes grammatical errors as reported in bug 678098

[David Wonderly (david.wonderly)]

Looks good. Reviewed and approved. - David

review: Approve

Unmerged revisions

191. By Nitesh Mistry on 2010-11-25

Fixes grammatical errors in welcome.xml

=== modified file 'docs/welcome/C/welcome.xml'
--- docs/welcome/C/welcome.xml	2010-09-09 21:54:57 +0000
+++ docs/welcome/C/welcome.xml	2010-11-25 10:07:03 +0000
@@ -69,11 +69,11 @@
 <sect2 id="releases-netbook">
 <title>&kubuntu; &distro-rev; with Plasma Netbook </title>
 <para>
-if you have a netbook Kubuntu will load up using the Plasma Netbook workspace.
-optimized for use with netbooks and smaller, portable devices. The Kubuntu with Plasma Netbook
-is a full-featured operating system that contains plenty of applications to
-suit your everyday needs, with more than 20,000 other titles available to be
-easily installed.
+If you have a netbook, Kubuntu will load up using the Plasma Netbook workspace.
+It is optimized for use with netbooks and smaller, portable devices. The Kubuntu
+with Plasma Netbook is a full-featured operating system that contains plenty of
+applications to suit your everyday needs, with more than 20,000 other titles
+available to be easily installed.
 </para>
 </sect2>
 </sect1>