Code review comment for lp:~mir-team/mir/public-cookie-api

> + * NULL will be returned if the buffer and size dont describe
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> s/dont/don't/
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Fixing

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> + * Construction function used to create a Authority. The secret size must be
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> s/a Authority/an Authority/
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> ~~~~
Fixing

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> + // TODO Soon to be removed!
> + static std::unique_ptr<Authority> create_saving(Secret& save_secret);
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> Why?
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Hmm that fixme shouldnt be there anymore? The reason was because we were going to create a lazy creation method for the secret. So we didnt depend on it on boot. Which ill be making a branch soon for that even though we've a work around in USC for the moment.
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> /// Sets an override functor for creating the cookie factory.
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> s/factory/authority/
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Fixing.
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> + mir::cookie::Blob copy_vector_to_cookie_blob(std::vector<uint8_t> const&
> vector)
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> It's local to the TU, so I wouldn't block, but I'd reserve "copy" for
> functions that take a target. I'd call it something like "as_blob".

Sounds good, fixing!