Code review comment for lp:~julian-edwards/maas/ntp-server-dhcp
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| Julian Edwards (julian-edwards) wrote | # |
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On 11/11/13 18:25, Graham Binns wrote:
> Review: Approve
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> Minor nitpick, otherwise looks good.
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> [1]
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> + "e.g. 91.189.94.4 (ntp.ubuntu.com)")
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> It's not clear from this what the example is. Should I copy just the IP, or the IP and what's inside the parens, or can I just use what's inside the parens?
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> I'd say something like: "e.g. for ntp.ubuntu.com: '91.189.94.4'".
Good call, thanks. I was hand-wringing over that one a bit :)