Code review comment for lp:~julian-edwards/maas/more-docs

Thanks. Good to see some attention being paid to documentation.

“When using third party tools such as ``juju`` it will need to be able to resolve the hostnames” hobbles a bit — tools, plural, are suddenly an “it.” How about just “Third-party tools such as ``juju`` may need the ability to resolve the hostnames”?

I suppose that note at the very end means that even if you could give a node multiple kernel-options tags, only an arbitrary one of them would actually be applied. Or are per-node kernel options combined? Worth a mention perhaps.