Merge lp:~jorgew/openstack-manuals/coreUpdates into lp:~annegentle/openstack-manuals/trunk
- coreUpdates
- Merge into trunk
Status: | Merged |
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Merged at revision: | 124 |
Proposed branch: | lp:~jorgew/openstack-manuals/coreUpdates |
Merge into: | lp:~annegentle/openstack-manuals/trunk |
Diff against target: |
506 lines (+110/-72) 21 files modified
doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/os-compute-devguide.xml (+40/-28) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.json (+1/-1) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.xml (+1/-1) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.json (+15/-1) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.xml (+13/-1) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.json (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.xml (+2/-2) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.json (+4/-4) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.xml (+4/-4) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.json (+4/-4) doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.xml (+4/-4) |
To merge this branch: | bzr merge lp:~jorgew/openstack-manuals/coreUpdates |
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Description of the change
Rename primaryIP -> accessIP
- 123. By Anne Gentle
-
Separating pom files for trunk docs v incubated docs
Anne Gentle (annegentle) wrote : | # |
Anne Gentle (annegentle) wrote : | # |
Also, do you need two hard page break processing directives in a row? I'm seeing <?hard-pagebreak?>
<?hard-pagebreak?> around line 520 in the source. Makes for a blank page in the PDF, page 8.
Jorge L. Williams (jorgew) wrote : | # |
On Jun 29, 2011, at 12:39 AM, Anne Gentle wrote:
> I'm not usually up this late to review docs! :)
>
> After merging, I spell-checked and found "not not" and fixed it, also seperate changed to separate. Also I believe overlimit should be overLimit. Let me know if these fixes are okay to include and then I'll push the merge.
All good catches! Yes it should be overLimit.
Yes go ahead an merge.
Thanks!
Jorge L. Williams (jorgew) wrote : | # |
Wow, yea get rid of that extra hard-break.
I meant to go back and add hard-breaks to make the PDF look good -- but I'll have to do that later.
Thanks!
On Jun 29, 2011, at 12:41 AM, Anne Gentle wrote:
> Also, do you need two hard page break processing directives in a row? I'm seeing <?hard-pagebreak?>
> <?hard-pagebreak?> around line 520 in the source. Makes for a blank page in the PDF, page 8.
> --
> https:/
> You are the owner of lp:~jorgew/openstack-manuals/coreUpdates.
- 124. By Anne Gentle
-
Merges and fixes for OS API 1.1 guide
Anne Gentle (annegentle) wrote : | # |
Okay, updated trunk and Cactus is copying up now. Thanks for the updates!
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1 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/os-compute-devguide.xml' |
2 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/os-compute-devguide.xml 2011-06-27 22:14:57 +0000 |
3 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/os-compute-devguide.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
4 | @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ |
5 | </copyright> |
6 | <releaseinfo>API v1.1</releaseinfo> |
7 | <productname>OpenStack Compute</productname> |
8 | - <pubdate>2011-06-23</pubdate> |
9 | + <pubdate>2011-06-29</pubdate> |
10 | <legalnotice role="apache2"> |
11 | <annotation> |
12 | <remark>Copyright details are filled in by the template.</remark> |
13 | @@ -123,6 +123,19 @@ |
14 | </thead> |
15 | <tbody> |
16 | <tr> |
17 | + <td colspan="1" align="center">June 29, 2011</td> |
18 | + <td colspan="4"> |
19 | + <itemizedlist spacing="compact"> |
20 | + <listitem> |
21 | + <para> |
22 | + Renamed Primary IP to |
23 | + Access IP. |
24 | + </para> |
25 | + </listitem> |
26 | + </itemizedlist> |
27 | + </td> |
28 | + </tr> |
29 | + <tr> |
30 | <td colspan="1" align="center">June 23, 2011</td> |
31 | <td colspan="4"> |
32 | <itemizedlist spacing="compact"> |
33 | @@ -1765,57 +1778,56 @@ |
34 | </para> |
35 | </section> |
36 | <section xml:id="Server_Primary_Addresses-d1e2558"> |
37 | - <title>Server Primary Addresses</title> |
38 | + <title>Server Access Addresses</title> |
39 | <para> |
40 | In a hybrid environment, the IP address of a |
41 | server may not be controlled by the underling |
42 | - implementation. Instead, the primary IP |
43 | - address may be part of the dedicated hardware; |
44 | - for example, a router/NAT device. In this |
45 | - case, the addresses provided by the |
46 | - implementation cannot actually be used to |
47 | - access the server (from outside the local |
48 | - LAN). Here, a <firstterm>primary |
49 | - address</firstterm> may be assigned at |
50 | - creation time to provide access to the server. |
51 | - This address may not be directly bound to a |
52 | - network interface on the server and may not |
53 | - not necessarily appear when a server's |
54 | + implementation. Instead, the access IP address |
55 | + may be part of the dedicated hardware; for |
56 | + example, a router/NAT device. In this case, |
57 | + the addresses provided by the implementation |
58 | + cannot actually be used to access the server |
59 | + (from outside the local LAN). Here, a seperate |
60 | + <firstterm>access address</firstterm> may be |
61 | + assigned at creation time to provide access to |
62 | + the server. This address may not be directly |
63 | + bound to a network interface on the server and |
64 | + may not not necessarily appear when a server's |
65 | addresses are queried (see <xref |
66 | linkend="ServerAddresses"/>). Nonetheless, |
67 | clients which need to access the server |
68 | - directly are encouraged to do so via a |
69 | - primary address. In the example below, an |
70 | - IPv4 address is assigned at creation time. |
71 | + directly are encouraged to do so via an access |
72 | + address. In the example below, an IPv4 |
73 | + address is assigned at creation time. |
74 | </para> |
75 | <example> |
76 | - <title>Creating a Server with a Primary IP: XML</title> |
77 | + <title>Creating a Server with a Access IP: XML</title> |
78 | <programlisting language="xml"> |
79 | <xi:include href="samples/server-post-req-pip.xml" parse="text"/> |
80 | </programlisting> |
81 | </example> |
82 | <example> |
83 | - <title>Creating a Server with a Primary IP: JSON</title> |
84 | + <title>Creating a Server with a Access IP: JSON</title> |
85 | <programlisting language="javascript"> |
86 | <xi:include href="samples/server-post-req-pip.json" parse="text"/> |
87 | </programlisting> |
88 | </example> |
89 | <para> |
90 | Note that both IPv4 and IPv6 addresses may be |
91 | - used as primary addresses and both addresses |
92 | + used as access addresses and both addresses |
93 | may be assigned simultaneously as illustrated |
94 | - below. Primary addresses may be updated after |
95 | + below. Access addresses may be updated after |
96 | a server has been created. See <xref |
97 | linkend="ServerUpdate"/> for more details. |
98 | </para> |
99 | <example> |
100 | - <title>Creating a Server with Multiple Primary IPs: XML</title> |
101 | + <title>Creating a Server with Multiple Access IPs: XML</title> |
102 | <programlisting language="xml"> |
103 | <xi:include href="samples/server-post-req-pip2.xml" parse="text"/> |
104 | </programlisting> |
105 | </example> |
106 | <example> |
107 | - <title>Creating a Server with Multiple Primary IPs: JSON</title> |
108 | + <title>Creating a Server with Multiple Access IPs: JSON</title> |
109 | <programlisting language="javascript"> |
110 | <xi:include href="samples/server-post-req-pip2.json" parse="text"/> |
111 | </programlisting> |
112 | @@ -1884,7 +1896,7 @@ |
113 | <td colspan="1">&PUT;</td> |
114 | <td colspan="2">/servers/<parameter>id</parameter></td> |
115 | <td colspan="3">Update the specified |
116 | - server's name and primary addresses</td> |
117 | + server's editable attributes</td> |
118 | </tr> |
119 | </tbody> |
120 | </informaltable> |
121 | @@ -1918,7 +1930,7 @@ |
122 | <para> |
123 | This operation updates the editable attributes of |
124 | a server: the name of the server, the server |
125 | - metadata, and the IPv4 and IPv6 primary address. |
126 | + metadata, and the IPv4 and IPv6 access address. |
127 | Note that while the server name is editable, the |
128 | operation does not change the server host |
129 | name. Note also that server names are not |
130 | @@ -1937,17 +1949,17 @@ |
131 | </programlisting> |
132 | </example> |
133 | <para> |
134 | - Primary addresses may simultaneously be updated as |
135 | + Access addresses may simultaneously be updated as |
136 | illustrated below. |
137 | </para> |
138 | <example> |
139 | - <title>Server Update Primary Address Request: XML</title> |
140 | + <title>Server Update Access Address Request: XML</title> |
141 | <programlisting language="xml"> |
142 | <xi:include href="samples/server-put-req-ad.xml" parse="text"/> |
143 | </programlisting> |
144 | </example> |
145 | <example> |
146 | - <title>Server Update Primary Address Request: JSON</title> |
147 | + <title>Server Update Access Address Request: JSON</title> |
148 | <programlisting language="javascript"> |
149 | <xi:include href="samples/server-put-req-ad.json" parse="text"/> |
150 | </programlisting> |
151 | |
152 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.json' |
153 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
154 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
155 | @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ |
156 | "hostId": "e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0", |
157 | "status": "BUILD", |
158 | "progress": 60, |
159 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
160 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
161 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
162 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
163 | "image" : { |
164 | "id": "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54", |
165 | "name": "CentOS 5.2", |
166 | |
167 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.xml' |
168 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
169 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/ext-servers.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
170 | @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ |
171 | progress="60" hostId="e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0" |
172 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
173 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
174 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
175 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
176 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
177 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
178 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
179 | name="CentOS 5.2"> |
180 | <atom:link |
181 | |
182 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.json' |
183 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
184 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
185 | @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ |
186 | "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
187 | "hostId": "9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6", |
188 | "status": "ACTIVE", |
189 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
190 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
191 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
192 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
193 | "addresses": { |
194 | "public" : [ |
195 | { |
196 | |
197 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.xml' |
198 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
199 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/image-create-full.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
200 | @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ |
201 | status="ACTIVE" hostId="9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6" |
202 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
203 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
204 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
205 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
206 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
207 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
208 | > |
209 | <addresses> |
210 | <network id="public"> |
211 | |
212 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.json' |
213 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
214 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
215 | @@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ |
216 | "flavor" : { |
217 | "id" : "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" |
218 | }, |
219 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132" |
220 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132" |
221 | } |
222 | } |
223 | |
224 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.xml' |
225 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
226 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
227 | @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ |
228 | <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> |
229 | <server xmlns="http://docs.openstack.org/compute/api/v1.1" |
230 | - name="test" primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132"> |
231 | + name="test" accessIPv4="67.23.10.132"> |
232 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" /> |
233 | <flavor id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" /> |
234 | </server> |
235 | |
236 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.json' |
237 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
238 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
239 | @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ |
240 | "flavor" : { |
241 | "id" : "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" |
242 | }, |
243 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
244 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132" |
245 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
246 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132" |
247 | } |
248 | } |
249 | |
250 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.xml' |
251 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
252 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req-pip2.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
253 | @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ |
254 | <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> |
255 | <server xmlns="http://docs.openstack.org/compute/api/v1.1" |
256 | name="test" |
257 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
258 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
259 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
260 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
261 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" /> |
262 | <flavor id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" /> |
263 | </server> |
264 | |
265 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.json' |
266 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
267 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
268 | @@ -2,7 +2,21 @@ |
269 | "server" : { |
270 | "name" : "new-server-test", |
271 | "image" : { |
272 | - "id" : "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
273 | + "id" : "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54", |
274 | + "name": "CentOS 5.2", |
275 | + "updated": "2010-10-10T12:00:00Z", |
276 | + "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
277 | + "status": "ACTIVE", |
278 | + "links": [ |
279 | + { |
280 | + "rel": "self", |
281 | + "href": "http://servers.api.openstack.org/v1.1/1234/images/52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
282 | + }, |
283 | + { |
284 | + "rel": "bookmark", |
285 | + "href": "http://servers.api.openstack.org/1234/images/52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
286 | + } |
287 | + ] |
288 | }, |
289 | "flavor" : { |
290 | "id" : "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" |
291 | |
292 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.xml' |
293 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
294 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-req.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
295 | @@ -1,7 +1,19 @@ |
296 | <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> |
297 | <server xmlns="http://docs.openstack.org/compute/api/v1.1" |
298 | + xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" |
299 | name="new-server-test"> |
300 | - <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" /> |
301 | + <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
302 | + name="CentOS 5.2" |
303 | + updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
304 | + created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
305 | + status="ACTIVE"> |
306 | + <atom:link |
307 | + rel="self" |
308 | + href="http://servers.api.openstack.org/v1.1/1234/images/52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54"/> |
309 | + <atom:link |
310 | + rel="bookmark" |
311 | + href="http://servers.api.openstack.org/1234/images/52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54"/> |
312 | + </image> |
313 | <flavor id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f1195ff37" /> |
314 | <metadata> |
315 | <meta key="My Server Name">Apache1</meta> |
316 | |
317 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.json' |
318 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
319 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
320 | @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ |
321 | "name": "new-server-test", |
322 | "created": "2010-11-11T12:00:00Z", |
323 | "hostId": "e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0", |
324 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.138", |
325 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.138", |
326 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.138", |
327 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.138", |
328 | "progress": 0, |
329 | "status": "BUILD", |
330 | "adminPass": "GFf1j9aP", |
331 | |
332 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.xml' |
333 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
334 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-post-resp.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
335 | @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ |
336 | hostId="e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0" progress="0" |
337 | status="BUILD" adminPass="GFf1j9aP" |
338 | created="2010-11-11T12:00:00Z" |
339 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.138" |
340 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.138"> |
341 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.138" |
342 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.138"> |
343 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
344 | name="CentOS 5.2"> |
345 | <atom:link |
346 | |
347 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.json' |
348 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
349 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
350 | @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ |
351 | { |
352 | "server" : |
353 | { |
354 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
355 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132" |
356 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
357 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132" |
358 | } |
359 | } |
360 | |
361 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.xml' |
362 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
363 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server-put-req-ad.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
364 | @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ |
365 | <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> |
366 | <server |
367 | xmlns="http://docs.openstack.org/compute/api/v1.1" |
368 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
369 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
370 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
371 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
372 | /> |
373 | |
374 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.json' |
375 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
376 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
377 | @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ |
378 | "updated": "2010-10-10T12:00:00Z", |
379 | "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
380 | "hostId": "e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0", |
381 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
382 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
383 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
384 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
385 | "status": "BUILD", |
386 | "progress": 60, |
387 | "image" : { |
388 | |
389 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.xml' |
390 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
391 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/server.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
392 | @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ |
393 | name="sample-server" status="BUILD" |
394 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
395 | progress="60" hostId="e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0" |
396 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
397 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
398 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
399 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132"> |
400 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
401 | name="CentOS 5.2"> |
402 | <atom:link |
403 | |
404 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.json' |
405 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
406 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
407 | @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ |
408 | "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
409 | "hostId": "e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0", |
410 | "status": "BUILD", |
411 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
412 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
413 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
414 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
415 | "progress": 60, |
416 | "image" : { |
417 | "id": "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54", |
418 | @@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ |
419 | "updated": "2010-10-10T12:00:00Z", |
420 | "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
421 | "hostId": "9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6", |
422 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
423 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
424 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
425 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
426 | "status": "ACTIVE", |
427 | "image" : { |
428 | "id": "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f5736d2a2", |
429 | |
430 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.xml' |
431 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
432 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers-page1.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
433 | @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ |
434 | progress="60" hostId="e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0" |
435 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
436 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
437 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
438 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
439 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
440 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
441 | > |
442 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
443 | name="CentOS 5.2"> |
444 | @@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ |
445 | status="ACTIVE" hostId="9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6" |
446 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
447 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
448 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
449 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
450 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
451 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
452 | > |
453 | <image |
454 | id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f5736d2a2" |
455 | |
456 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.json' |
457 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.json 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
458 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.json 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
459 | @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ |
460 | "hostId": "e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0", |
461 | "status": "BUILD", |
462 | "progress": 60, |
463 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
464 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
465 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.132", |
466 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.132", |
467 | "image" : { |
468 | "id": "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54", |
469 | "name": "CentOS 5.2", |
470 | @@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ |
471 | "created": "2010-08-10T12:00:00Z", |
472 | "hostId": "9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6", |
473 | "status": "ACTIVE", |
474 | - "primaryIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
475 | - "primaryIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
476 | + "accessIPv4" : "67.23.10.133", |
477 | + "accessIPv6" : "::babe:67.23.10.133", |
478 | "image" : { |
479 | "id": "52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f5736d2a2", |
480 | "name": "My Server Backup", |
481 | |
482 | === modified file 'doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.xml' |
483 | --- doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.xml 2011-06-24 00:43:26 +0000 |
484 | +++ doc/source/docbkx/openstack-compute-api-1.1/samples/servers.xml 2011-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 |
485 | @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ |
486 | progress="60" hostId="e4d909c290d0fb1ca068ffaddf22cbd0" |
487 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
488 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
489 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
490 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
491 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.132" |
492 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.132" |
493 | > |
494 | <image id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f6f006e54" |
495 | name="CentOS 5.2"> |
496 | @@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ |
497 | status="ACTIVE" hostId="9e107d9d372bb6826bd81d3542a419d6" |
498 | updated="2010-10-10T12:00:00Z" |
499 | created="2010-08-10T12:00:00Z" |
500 | - primaryIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
501 | - primaryIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
502 | + accessIPv4="67.23.10.133" |
503 | + accessIPv6="::babe:67.23.10.133" |
504 | > |
505 | <image |
506 | id="52415800-8b69-11e0-9b19-734f5736d2a2" |
I'm not usually up this late to review docs! :)
After merging, I spell-checked and found "not not" and fixed it, also seperate changed to separate. Also I believe overlimit should be overLimit. Let me know if these fixes are okay to include and then I'll push the merge.