Merge lp:~hjd/widelands/metalworks-text-bug-734409 into lp:widelands

[Hans Joachim Desserud]

(See bug 734409 for details)
Reworked part of the campaign text to avoid confusion around axe factories and blacksmith/master blacksmith.

The change on line 336 is the one who is shown in the story dialog, while the change on line 111 is the reminder shown if the player checks current objectives.

[SirVer (sirver)]

review: Approve

[Nasenbaer (nasenbaer)]

From me a disapprove - of course your text is nicer to read and I generally like the new texts, but the main problem for me is: the player reads a long sentance and stops somewhere as (s)he is quite sure (s)he already got the point - so propably (s)he misses the *very important* note, that (s)he should only upgrade the building, if the worker reaches the next level....

review: Disapprove

[SirVer (sirver)]

Hey Peter! Glad to see you around :)

Do you have a suggestions for better wording in this particular case? I feel that the minimum we have to expect from the players is to read the mission texts.

[Nasenbaer (nasenbaer)]

Hey SirVer :), you'll never get rid of me ;) :-D ...

I just reread the text and I think I was actually wrong - seems things got mixed up after 9 hours of work ;). So approved and will be merged in the next few minutes. :)

review: Approve

=== modified file 'campaigns/t03.wmf/scripting/texts.lua'
--- campaigns/t03.wmf/scripting/texts.lua	2011-01-04 12:17:44 +0000
+++ campaigns/t03.wmf/scripting/texts.lua	2011-06-04 16:33:36 +0000
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
    name = "build_weapon_productions",
    title=_"Build weapon productions",
    body= "<rt><p line-spacing=3 font-size=12>" ..
-_"* Enhance your metalworks to an axefactory or - as soon as the blacksmith reaches his next level (master blacksmith) - even to a war mill and build up another metalworks to ensure the production of tools." ..
+_"* Enhance your metalworks to an axefactory to start producing weapons, and build up another metalworks to ensure the production of tools. When the blacksmith reaches his next level (master blacksmith), you can even enhance your axefactory to a war mill." ..
 "</p></rt>",
 }
 
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@
 "<br>" ..
 _"* Build a battle arena and a trainings camp to the west of the mountains." ..
 "<br>" ..
-_"* As soon as the blacksmith reaches his next level (master blacksmith) enhance your metalworks to an axefactory or even a war mill and build up another metalworks to ensure the production of tools." ..
+_"* Enhance your metalworks to an axefactory in order to produce weapons and build up another metalworks to ensure the production of tools. When the blacksmith reaches his next level (master blacksmith), you can even enhance it to a war mill which produces additional weapons." ..
 "<br>" ..
 _"* Build a helmsmithy to the west of the mountains to provide your soldiers with better armor." ..
 "</p></rt>",