Code review comment for ~bryce/ubuntu/+source/apache2:fix-lp1966004-jammy

I just saw that this isn't even an upstream page that Debian modified, instead it is "just" a file in debian/ . That is great as I expect less churn on that and furthermore zero churn when we e.g. backport changes for SRUs or such.
I'm happy with the maintenance effort that should come out of this as Debian rarely updates this.

The new visuals LGTM, lets us see what others say.

The typos, whitespace and comment removal could be submitted to Debian once we agree on our way for Jammy.

+1 from my POV