Merge lp:~kotux/ubuntu-docs/improved-lowpower into lp:ubuntu-docs/trusty

[John Kim]

Just added some clarity to a paragraph on power-lowpower.page. LP #1189282

This merge proposal has been on hold for several months and is waiting for review.

[Doug Smythies (dsmythies)]

Hmmm... This Merge Proposal is actually new. The old one, along with the useful comments seems to have been deleted.

Yes, the display differentiation issues, that I always thought were the root issue here have been fixed.

Anyway, I'll approve this and merge it.

review: Approve

=== modified file 'ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page'
--- ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page	2013-09-19 00:20:18 +0000
+++ ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page	2014-02-14 16:24:53 +0000
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
 the battery. If the battery just ran out, the computer wouldn't have time to
 shut down properly either.</p>
 
-<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low by clicking
- the <gui>battery menu</gui> in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and selecting <gui>Power Settings</gui>. Look at the <gui>When
-power is critically low</gui> setting. You can choose for the computer to
-suspend, <link xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link> or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and
-documents <em>will not</em> be saved before the computer turns off.</p>
+<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low. First, click the 
+<gui>battery menu</gui> in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and select <gui>Power Settings</gui>. At the <gui>'When
+power is critically low'</gui> setting, you can choose for the computer to
+suspend, <link xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link>, or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and
+documents <em>will not</em> be saved when the computer turns off.</p>
 
 <p>Some computers have problems suspending, and may not be able to recover the
 applications and documents you had open when you turn on the computer again. In