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483. By Tim McNamara on 2010-03-20

Edited introductory paragraphs

Actions & justifications:

"New to Ubuntu?"
  Removed redundancy in "New to Ubuntu"?
    Appeared twice: once in header, then in first sentence
  Expanded the first sentance into listitems
    Attempted to use more of the page, so the contents didn't
    have such a visually dominating effect.

"Welcome to Ubuntu"
  Spread content out to two sentences
    There were two messages. One was about Ubuntu, the other
    was about getting new software. This commit provides a
    visual seperation, so that the messages are clearer.

482. By Tim McNamara on 2010-03-20

Largely cosmetic changes

Added the occasional comma. Discarded semi-colons in favour of new
sentences. Attempted to shorten sentences where beneficial.

Non-trivial changes:
  location - action - justification
  l 78 - deleted some text - Sounded a little too much like an advert.
  l 79 - removed 'update' - Not accurate
  l 87 - content changes - Provided some more specifics, used 'non-free'
                           over 'proprietary' because it's more accurate

481. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-13

Use default serverguide index.html file location for accessing serverguide in terminal, LP: #537167

480. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-13

Added mention of gsynaptics in hardware section, LP: #450567

479. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-13

Command line substitution for Services utility which is not in Karmic or Lucid, LP: #518460

478. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-12

Expanded on using config files for vpn connections in internet section

477. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-12

Additions to VPN section of internet connecting guide. Alex Wardle, LP: #452647

476. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-11

Split off directions for exporting favorites in IE8 in windows and switching sections. Broke different IE versions down into subsections, LP: #528808

475. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-11

Removed old string from Windows section and copied correct string to Switching guide, LP: #527905

474. By Connor Imes on 2010-03-10

Added note in serverguide mail section about some packages being in the multiverse repository, LP: #509355