Merge ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager:snap-description-tweak into ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager:master

Proposed by Kyle Nitzsche
Status: Approved
Approved by: Kyle Nitzsche
Approved revision: 219886ba7633a82aef1731b7839feccad3bd032e
Proposed branch: ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager:snap-description-tweak
Merge into: ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager:master
Diff against target: 23 lines (+6/-7)
1 file modified
snapcraft.yaml (+6/-7)
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
System Enablement Bot continuous-integration Needs Fixing
Alfonso Sanchez-Beato Approve
Review via email: mp+352775@code.launchpad.net

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Suggested tweak on wording of the modem-manager snap description.

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System Enablement Bot (system-enablement-ci-bot) wrote :

PASSED: Successfully build documentation, rev: 219886ba7633a82aef1731b7839feccad3bd032e

Generated documentation is available at https://jenkins.canonical.com/system-enablement/job/snappy-hwe-snaps-snap-docs/1095/

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System Enablement Bot (system-enablement-ci-bot) wrote :
review: Needs Fixing (continuous-integration)
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Alfonso Sanchez-Beato (alfonsosanchezbeato) wrote :

LGTM

review: Approve
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PASSED: Successfully build documentation, rev: 219886ba7633a82aef1731b7839feccad3bd032e

Generated documentation is available at https://jenkins.canonical.com/system-enablement/job/snappy-hwe-snaps-snap-docs/1096/

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System Enablement Bot (system-enablement-ci-bot) wrote :
review: Needs Fixing (continuous-integration)
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Alfonso Sanchez-Beato (alfonsosanchezbeato) wrote :

@Kyle, would you mind rebasing this MP to latest in master? Iirc the problem the caused the CI error was solved a while ago.

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219886b... by Kyle Nitzsche <email address hidden>

Tweak snap description for style and grammer

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1diff --git a/snapcraft.yaml b/snapcraft.yaml
2index 67403ef..094dcb7 100644
3--- a/snapcraft.yaml
4+++ b/snapcraft.yaml
5@@ -1,13 +1,12 @@
6 name: modem-manager
7 version: 1.6.12-4-dev
8-summary: ModemManager is a service which controls mobile broadband
9+summary: ModemManager is a service that controls mobile broadband
10 description: |
11- ModemManager is a DBus-activated daemon which controls mobile broadband
12- (2G/3G/4G) devices and connections. Whether built-in devices, USB dongles,
13- bluetooth-paired telephones or professional RS232/USB devices with external
14- power supplies, ModemManager is able to prepare and configure the modems and
15- setup connections with them.
16- Please find the source code at https://code.launchpad.net/~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager
17+ ModemManager is a DBus-activated daemon that configures and controls
18+ mobile broadband (2G/3G/4G) devices and connections. Modem manager
19+ handles built-in devices, USB dongles, bluetooth-paired
20+ telephones and RS232/USB modem devices with external power supplies.
21+ Source code: https://code.launchpad.net/~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/modem-manager
22 confinement: strict
23 grade: stable
24

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