Merge lp:~petermatulis/serverguide/review_pam-motd into lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/serverguide/saucy

[Peter Matulis]

Review and minor changes.

[Doug Smythies (dsmythies)]

Peter, this looks good. I didn't actually build it. Can you go ahead and merge it, as I couldn't get to it for a couple of days.?

review: Approve

[Peter Matulis (petermatulis)]

Roger

=== modified file 'serverguide/C/other-apps.xml'
--- serverguide/C/other-apps.xml	2013-05-13 15:42:29 +0000
+++ serverguide/C/other-apps.xml	2013-07-10 16:00:40 +0000
@@ -29,14 +29,31 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
         <emphasis>landscape-common:</emphasis> provides the core libraries of <application>landscape-client</application>,
-        which can be used to manage systems using the web based <emphasis>Landscape</emphasis> application.  The package includes
-        the <application>/usr/bin/landscape-sysinfo</application> utility which is used to gather the information displayed
-        in the MOTD.
+	which is needed to manage systems with <ulink url="http://landscape.canonical.com/">Landscape</ulink> (proprietary).  Yet the package also includes
+        the <application>landscape-sysinfo</application> utility which is responsible for displaying core system data involving cpu, memory, disk space, etc.  For instance:
         </para>
+
+<screen>
+<computeroutput>
+	  System load:  0.0               Processes:           76
+	  Usage of /:   30.2% of 3.11GB   Users logged in:     1
+	  Memory usage: 20%               IP address for eth0: 10.153.107.115
+	  Swap usage:   0%
+
+	  Graph this data and manage this system at https://landscape.canonical.com/
+</computeroutput>
+</screen>
+
+        <note>
+                <para>
+                You can run landscape-sysinfo manually at any time.
+                </para>
+        </note>
+
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-        <emphasis>update-notifier-common:</emphasis> is used to automatically update the MOTD via <application>pam_motd</application> module.
+        <emphasis>update-notifier-common:</emphasis> provides information on available package updates, impending filesystem checks (fsck), and required reboots (e.g.: after a kernel upgrade).
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>