Merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/ri-li/858553-Spelling-Error-Fix into lp:ubuntu/oneiric/ri-li

[Paul Stewart]

* Changed spelling of 'musics' to '..music tunes...'
* Changed 'wood' to 'wooden'
* Formatted the first list sentence to put a space between the words 'Slovak' and 'Spanish'
* Added a period to the end of the 3rd bullet point list sentence

* Changed spelling of 'musics' to '..music tunes...'
* Changed 'wood' to 'wooden'
* Formatted the first list sentence to put a space between the words 'Slovak' and 'Spanish'
* Added a period to the end of the 3rd bullet point list sentence

[Stefano Rivera (stefanor)]

Please submit this to Debian, I don't like deviating from Debian simply for Description changes. Debian really is the best place to do this.

review: Disapprove

Unmerged revisions

5. By Paul Stewart on 2011-09-24

* Changed spelling of 'musics' to '..music tunes...'
* Changed 'wood' to 'wooden'
* Formatted the first list sentence to put a space between the words 'Slovak' and 'Spanish'

=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control	2008-04-20 21:32:04 +0000
+++ debian/control	2011-09-24 23:28:23 +0000
@@ -14,16 +14,15 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ri-li-data (>= ${source:Version})
 Description: a toy train simulation game
- Ri-Li is a game in which you drive a toy wood engine across many levels 
+ Ri-Li is a game in which you drive a toy wooden engine across many levels 
  and collect all the coaches to win.
  .
  Full-features:
   - 14 languages: Arabic, Breton, Chinese, English, Esperanto, French,
-  German, Italian, Japanese, Portuguese, Russian, Slovak,
-  Spanish, Swedish.
-  - Colorful animated wood engine.
-  - 40 levels in this first version
-  - 3 beautiful musics and many sound effects.
+  German, Italian, Japanese, Portuguese, Russian, Slovak, Spanish, Swedish.
+  - A colorful animated wooden engine.
+  - 40 levels in this first version.
+  - 3 beautiful music tunes and many sound effects.
 
 Package: ri-li-data
 Recommends: ri-li