Merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/biniax2/834199-Spelling-Grammar-Fix into lp:ubuntu/oneiric/biniax2

[Paul Stewart]

* Changed "gameplay" to "game-play"
* Changed "singleplayer" to "single-player"
* Changed "multiplayer" to "multi-player"
* Changed sentence from "Takes..." to "It only takes..."
* Changed "...hall of fame,..." to "...a hall of fame,..."

Fixed spelling and grammar errors in the control file description that displays in the Ubuntu Software Center.

* Changed "gameplay" to "game-play"
* Changed "singleplayer" to "single-player"
* Changed "multiplayer" to "multi-player"
* Changed sentence from "Takes..." to "It only takes..."
* Changed "...hall of fame,..." to "...a hall of fame,..."

[Brian Murray (brian-murray)]

I'm personally not certain that game-play should be hyphenated rather "game play" seems better to me. Additionally, I've never seen single player hyphenated

Regardless this package is synchronized with Debian and the fix should be sent upstream and incorporated there. Thanks for your work on this.

review: Disapprove

[Colin Watson (cjwatson)]

Rejecting at Brian's request, in favour of this being sent to Debian.

Unmerged revisions

6. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-25

* Changed "...hall of fame,..." to "...a hall of fame,..."

5. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-25

* Changed sentence from "Takes..." to "It only takes..."

4. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-25

* Changed "gameplay" to "game-play"
* Changed "singleplayer" to "single-player"
* Changed "multiplayer" to "multi-player"

=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control	2009-09-27 10:45:47 +0000
+++ debian/control	2011-08-25 23:03:28 +0000
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: biniax2-data (= ${source:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: logic game with arcade and tactics modes
- Biniax-2 is an original and entertaining game. Takes a minute to learn and
- gives you hours and hours of gameplay. There are three game modes (two
- singleplayer and one multiplayer), hall of fame, dynamic music and a nice
+ Biniax-2 is an original and entertaining game. It only takes a minute to learn and
+ gives you hours and hours of game-play. There are three game modes (two
+ single-player and one multi-player), a hall of fame, dynamic music and a nice
  cartoon look. 
 
 Package: biniax2-data