Merge lp:~paulbrianstewart/ubuntu/oneiric/alien-arena/834369-Spelling-Grammar-Errors-Fix into lp:ubuntu/oneiric/alien-arena

[Paul Stewart]

* Changed the spelling of "deathmatch" to "death-match"
* Changed "32 bit" to "32-bit"
* Changed "hi resolution" to "hi-resolution"
* Changed "hi poly" to "hi-poly"
* Added some commas to the long sentences to break them up.

Corrected some of the spelling errors in the description and also reworded it, using commas to break up some of the long sentences.

* Changed the spelling of "deathmatch" to "death-match"
* Changed "32 bit" to "32-bit"
* Changed "hi resolution" to "hi-resolution"
* Changed "hi poly" to "hi-poly"
* Added some commas to the long sentences to break them up.

[Brian Murray (brian-murray)]

This package is sync'ed with Debian and this particular fix and bug should be forwarded upstream.

review: Disapprove

[Colin Watson (cjwatson)]

Rejecting at Brian's request, in favour of this being sent to Debian.

Unmerged revisions

14. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-26

* Reverted "rivalling" back to the US spelling of "rivaling"

13. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-26

* Changed "rivaling" to "rivalling"

12. By Paul Stewart on 2011-08-26

* Changed the spelling of "deathmatch" to "death-match"
* Changed "32 bit" to "32-bit"
* Changed "hi resolution" to "hi-resolution"
* Changed "hi poly" to "hi-poly"
* Added some commas to the long sentences to break them up.

=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control	2011-06-06 13:42:17 +0000
+++ debian/control	2011-08-26 04:01:24 +0000
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@
  libopenal1,
  alien-arena-data
 Description: Standalone 3D first person online deathmatch shooter
- ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online deathmatch shooter
+ ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter
  crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released
- by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32 bit
- graphics, new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
- hi resolution textures and skins, hi poly models, stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
+ by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit
+ graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
+ hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
  pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivaling today's top games.
  .
  This package installs the SDL client for Alien Arena.
@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@
  ruby,
  alien-arena-data
 Description: Dedicated server for Alien Arena
- ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online deathmatch shooter
+ ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter
  crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released
- by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32 bit
- graphics, new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
- hi resolution textures and skins, hi poly models, stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
+ by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit
+ graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
+ hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
  pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivaling today's top games.
  .
  This package installs the dedicated server for Alien Arena.