Merge lp:~mhall119/unity8/finish-tour into lp:unity8

Proposed by Michael Hall
Status: Merged
Approved by: Michael Zanetti
Approved revision: 277
Merged at revision: 282
Proposed branch: lp:~mhall119/unity8/finish-tour
Merge into: lp:unity8
Diff against target: 30 lines (+7/-1)
2 files modified
Components/EdgeDemo.qml (+2/-1)
Components/EdgeDemoOverlay.qml (+5/-0)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~mhall119/unity8/finish-tour
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
PS Jenkins bot (community) continuous-integration Approve
Michael Zanetti (community) Approve
Katie Taylor (community) design Needs Fixing
Review via email: mp+183037@code.launchpad.net

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Add a little bit of text to the last step of the tour telling the user how to end it and get to their phone.

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Add a little bit of text to the last step of the tour telling the user how to end it and get to their phone.

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review: Approve (continuous-integration)
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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

Katie, you fine with this change?

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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

There are two spaces "...phone. Tap..."

Intentional or typo?

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Katie Taylor (katie-t) wrote :

Hello!

great idea. Can't see how to alter the text, but think it should be this: (remove "to finish the tour", replace with "to exit.")

"You have now mastered the edge gestures and can start using the phone. Tap anywhere to exit."

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Michael Hall (mhall119) wrote :

@Michael, old habit from when I first learned to type, two-spaced between sentences was "proper" back then.

@Katie, do you think it should be "to exit the tour"? If it's just "to exit" I'm concerned the user might think they were exiting more than just the tour.

I'm happy to make both changes though.

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review: Approve (continuous-integration)
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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

lgtm. waiting for katie to answer last question.

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Katie Taylor (katie-t) wrote :

Hello!

I've discussed it with Tingting (usability specialist) and we agree it should say "Tap anywhere to start." since we mention start using the phone in the previous sentence.

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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

I guess the same question applies: "tap anywhere to start" or "tap anywhere to start using Ubuntu" (or something like that)

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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

oh... just realized that the previous sentence says "start using your phone". we're good then.

@Michael: Please change it as suggested by Katie and Tingting and I'll approve.

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review: Needs Fixing (continuous-integration)
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Michael Hall (mhall119) wrote :

Here are some possible ways of displaying this: http://ubuntuone.com/5rVPw9uOqj8UjfGZiNZQpj

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Michael Hall (mhall119) wrote :
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Michael Terry (mterry) wrote :

Two spaces between sentences isn't proper anymore? I haven't unlearned that yet...

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Michael Zanetti (mzanetti) wrote :

lgtm

review: Approve
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review: Needs Fixing (continuous-integration)
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1=== modified file 'Components/EdgeDemo.qml'
2--- Components/EdgeDemo.qml 2013-08-28 19:59:50 +0000
3+++ Components/EdgeDemo.qml 2013-09-03 14:26:03 +0000
4@@ -218,8 +218,9 @@
5 d.finalEdgeDemo = d.overlay.createObject(demo.underlay, {
6 "edge": "none",
7 "title": i18n.tr("Well done"),
8- "text": i18n.tr("You have now mastered the edge gestures and can start using the phone"),
9+ "text": i18n.tr("You have now mastered the edge gestures and can start using the phone<br><br>Tap anywhere to start"),
10 "anchors.fill": demo.dash,
11+ "showSkip": false,
12 });
13 }
14 if (d.finalEdgeDemo) {
15
16=== modified file 'Components/EdgeDemoOverlay.qml'
17--- Components/EdgeDemoOverlay.qml 2013-08-27 13:46:35 +0000
18+++ Components/EdgeDemoOverlay.qml 2013-09-03 14:26:03 +0000
19@@ -44,6 +44,11 @@
20 property alias skipText: skipLabel.text
21
22 /*
23+ * This is the visible status of the skip button.
24+ */
25+ property alias showSkip: skipLabel.visible
26+
27+ /*
28 * Whether this demo is running currently.
29 */
30 readonly property bool active: available && visible

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