Merge lp:~littlergirl/kubuntu-docs/games into lp:kubuntu-docs/precise

Proposed by Little Girl on 2012-03-25
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 269
Proposed branch: lp:~littlergirl/kubuntu-docs/games
Merge into: lp:kubuntu-docs/precise
Diff against target: 176 lines (+45/-35)
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docs/games/C/games.xml (+45/-35)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~littlergirl/kubuntu-docs/games
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David Wonderly 2012-03-25 Pending
Review via email: mp+99199@code.launchpad.net

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* Fixed some grammar.
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1=== modified file 'docs/games/C/games.xml'
2--- docs/games/C/games.xml 2011-09-15 08:07:30 +0000
3+++ docs/games/C/games.xml 2012-03-25 03:08:17 +0000
4@@ -14,7 +14,8 @@
5 <abstract>
6 <para>
7 This document provides an overview of the games available with &kubuntu;, and
8-suggestions on how to run some Windows games with &kubuntu;.
9+suggestions on how to run some <trademark>Windows</trademark> games with
10+&kubuntu;.
11 </para>
12 </abstract>
13 </articleinfo>
14@@ -23,22 +24,23 @@
15 <title>Introduction</title>
16
17 <para>
18-When installing &kubuntu; via a DVDROM, all of the KDE Games are installed.
19-However, when installing &kubuntu; from a CDROM, no KDE Games are installed, due
20-to the lack of available space on the CDROM. It is simple to install games after
21-a CDROM install. Please review the <ulink type="help"
22+When installing &kubuntu; via a <acronym>DVDROM</acronym>, all of the &kde;
23+games are installed. When installing &kubuntu; from a <acronym>CDROM</acronym>,
24+however, no &kde; games are installed, due to the lack of available space on
25+the <acronym>CDROM</acronym>. It is simple to install games after a
26+<acronym>CDROM</acronym> install. Please review the <ulink type="help"
27 url="help:/kubuntu/manage-software/">Software Management</ulink> topic.
28 </para>
29 </sect1>
30 <sect1 id="kdegames">
31-<title>KDE Games</title>
32+<title>&kde; Games</title>
33 <para>
34-KDE Games is a collection of various games designed especially for the KDE
35-Workspace. The KDE Game categories are: arcade, board, card, dice, logic,
36+&kde; Games is a collection of various games designed especially for the &kde;
37+Workspace. The &kde; Game categories are: arcade, board, card, dice, logic,
38 strategy, and toy.
39 </para>
40 <sect2 id="kdegames-arcade">
41-<title>KDE Games - Arcade</title>
42+<title>&kde; Games - Arcade</title>
43 <para>
44 To view more information about these games, please go to <ulink
45 url="http://games.kde.org/category.php?category=arcade"/>.
46@@ -49,8 +51,8 @@
47 <para>
48 A single-player arcade game with puzzle elements. It is played on a field
49 surrounded by a wall. Balls move on the field, bouncing off of the walls.
50-Successfully completing a level starts an empty field with additional balls. The
51-object of the game is to build new walls to decrease the size of the active
52+Successfully completing a level starts an empty field with additional balls.
53+The object of the game is to build new walls to decrease the size of the active
54 field.
55 </para>
56 </listitem>
57@@ -220,9 +222,9 @@
58 <varlistentry><term>Kiriki</term>
59 <listitem>
60 <para>
61-An addictive dice game, similar to Yahtzee, that can be played by as many as six
62-players. Participants collect points by rolling five dice for up to three times
63-in a single turn.
64+An addictive dice game, similar to Yahtzee, that can be played by as many as
65+six players. Participants collect points by rolling five dice for up to three
66+times in a single turn.
67 </para>
68 </listitem>
69 </varlistentry>
70@@ -295,8 +297,8 @@
71 <listitem>
72 <para>
73 A clone of GNU-Lactic where players conquer other planets by sending ships to
74-them. The goal is to build an interstellar empire and conquer all other player's
75-planets.
76+them. The goal is to build an interstellar empire and conquer all other
77+players' planets.
78 </para>
79 </listitem>
80 </varlistentry>
81@@ -344,9 +346,9 @@
82 <sect1 id="gnome-games">
83 <title>GNOME Games</title>
84 <para>
85-Even though you are using &kubuntu;, which features the KDE Workspace, you can
86-still install and play games designed for the GNOME Desktop Environment. To read
87-more about GNOME Games, please go to <ulink
88+Even though you are using &kubuntu;, which features the &kde; Workspace, you
89+can still install and play games designed for the &gnome; Desktop Environment.
90+To read more about &gnome; Games, please go to <ulink
91 url="http://live.gnome.org/GnomeGames/"/>.
92 </para>
93 </sect1>
94@@ -354,15 +356,15 @@
95 <sect1 id="linux-games">
96 <title>Games For Linux</title>
97 <para>
98-There are quite a few popular game titles for the Linux system. For more
99-information on the games available for Linux, please read the following
100-websites:
101+There are quite a few popular game titles for the <trademark>Linux</trademark>
102+system. For more information on the games available for
103+<trademark>Linux</trademark>, please read the following websites:
104 </para>
105 <itemizedlist>
106 <listitem>
107 <para>
108-<ulink url="http://whdb.com/2008/top-25-linux-games-for-2008/">Top 25 Linux
109-Games for 2008</ulink>
110+<ulink url="http://whdb.com/2008/top-25-linux-games-for-2008/">Top 25
111+<trademark>Linux</trademark> Games for 2008</ulink>
112 </para>
113 </listitem>
114 <listitem>
115@@ -384,7 +386,7 @@
116 </itemizedlist>
117 <para>
118 To see the games available in the &kubuntu; repositories, open
119-<application>muon</application>, &kubuntu;&apos;s package management
120+<application>muon</application>, &kubuntu;'s package management
121 application by going to &menusysmuon; and then selecting
122 <guilabel>Games</guilabel>.
123 </para>
124@@ -393,18 +395,25 @@
125 <sect1 id="windows-games">
126 <title>Windows Games</title>
127 <para>
128-Windows-based games do not operate natively in &kubuntu;. However there are
129-applications available that allow playing some Windows-based games. Cedega
130-(listed below) is popular among gamers, though it isn't a free service.
131-PlayOnLinux (listed below) is another popular application which is free of
132-charge. Wine (listed below) is a more advanced application. For gaming, both
133-Cedega and PlayOnLinux are recommended over Wine.
134+<trademark>Windows</trademark>-based games do not operate
135+natively in &kubuntu;. There are, however, applications available which allow
136+playing some <trademark>Windows</trademark>-based games.
137+<trademark>Cedega</trademark> (listed below) is popular among gamers, although
138+it isn't a free service. <trademark>PlayOnLinux</trademark> (listed below) is
139+another popular application which is free of charge.
140+<trademark>Wine</trademark> (listed below) is a more advanced application. For
141+gaming, both <trademark>Cedega</trademark> and
142+<trademark>PlayOnLinux</trademark> are recommended over
143+<trademark>Wine</trademark>.
144 </para>
145-<variablelist><title>Play Windows Games on Linux</title>
146+
147+<variablelist><title>Play <trademark>Windows</trademark> Games on
148+<trademark>Linux</trademark></title>
149 <varlistentry><term>Wine</term>
150 <listitem>
151 <para>
152-An application that allows some software made for Windows to run within Linux.
153+An application that allows some software made for
154+<trademark>Windows</trademark> to run within <trademark>Linux</trademark>.
155 </para>
156 <para>
157 Go to <ulink url="http://www.winehq.org"/> for more information.
158@@ -415,7 +424,7 @@
159 <listitem>
160 <para>
161 An application to install numerous games and applications designed to run on
162-Windows.
163+<trademark>Windows</trademark>.
164 </para>
165 <para>
166 Go to <ulink url="http://www.playonlinux.com"/> for more information.
167@@ -425,7 +434,8 @@
168 <varlistentry><term>Cedega</term>
169 <listitem>
170 <para>
171-An application that allows numerous Windows games to be run on Linux.
172+An application that allows numerous <trademark>Windows</trademark> games to be
173+run on <trademark>Linux</trademark>.
174 </para>
175 <para>
176 Go to <ulink url="http://www.cedega.com"/> for more information.

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