Merge lp:~kotux/ubuntu-docs/improved-lowpower into lp:ubuntu-docs/saucy

Proposed by John Kim on 2014-02-14
Status: Superseded
Proposed branch: lp:~kotux/ubuntu-docs/improved-lowpower
Merge into: lp:ubuntu-docs/saucy
Diff against target: 20 lines (+5/-5)
1 file modified
ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page (+5/-5)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~kotux/ubuntu-docs/improved-lowpower
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Doug Smythies 2014-02-14 Pending
Review via email: mp+206522@code.launchpad.net

Description of the change

Just added some clarity to a paragraph on power-lowpower.page. LP #1189282

This merge proposal has been on hold for several months and is waiting for review.

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217. By John Kim on 2013-06-13

Improved a paragraph in power-lowpower. LP #1189282

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1=== modified file 'ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page'
2--- ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page 2013-09-19 00:20:18 +0000
3+++ ubuntu-help/C/power-lowpower.page 2014-02-14 16:24:00 +0000
4@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
5 the battery. If the battery just ran out, the computer wouldn't have time to
6 shut down properly either.</p>
7
8-<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low by clicking
9- the <gui>battery menu</gui> in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and selecting <gui>Power Settings</gui>. Look at the <gui>When
10-power is critically low</gui> setting. You can choose for the computer to
11-suspend, <link xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link> or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and
12-documents <em>will not</em> be saved before the computer turns off.</p>
13+<p>You can change what happens when the battery level gets too low. First, click the
14+<gui>battery menu</gui> in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and select <gui>Power Settings</gui>. At the <gui>'When
15+power is critically low'</gui> setting, you can choose for the computer to
16+suspend, <link xref="power-hibernate">hibernate</link>, or shut down. If you choose shut down, your applications and
17+documents <em>will not</em> be saved when the computer turns off.</p>
18
19 <p>Some computers have problems suspending, and may not be able to recover the
20 applications and documents you had open when you turn on the computer again. In

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