- 33: "to provide additional information" is too vague description
for scalability metrics plugin
- 50: s/Scalability Metrics/The plugin
- 74: I don't understand the "(status variables)" bit?
- s/starting point/the starting point, but I don't particularly
like it. I'd try removing it completely.
- scalability_metrics_totaltime: of currently executing queries?
of all completed queries? something else?
- 112: define "server's total busy time"
- slow query log docs not updated for 1287650 (look at 140, 141)
- 149: Remove instead of each query having ... and the last
sentence, write "... deterministically. With the current
implementation each query has a non-deterministic probability of
1/n to get logged."
- 488: link atomic writes
- 490: s/selection of query/selection of queries
- "PS has implemented X" comment has not been addressed. "X has
been implemented for PS" is more correct, but not necessarily
nicer, I'd try to think of some other way to say.
- 33: "to provide additional information" is too vague description metrics_ totaltime: of currently executing queries? ation each query has a non-deterministic probability of
for scalability metrics plugin
- 50: s/Scalability Metrics/The plugin
- 74: I don't understand the "(status variables)" bit?
- s/starting point/the starting point, but I don't particularly
like it. I'd try removing it completely.
- scalability_
of all completed queries? something else?
- 112: define "server's total busy time"
- slow query log docs not updated for 1287650 (look at 140, 141)
- 149: Remove instead of each query having ... and the last
sentence, write "... deterministically. With the current
implement
1/n to get logged."
- 488: link atomic writes
- 490: s/selection of query/selection of queries
- "PS has implemented X" comment has not been addressed. "X has
been implemented for PS" is more correct, but not necessarily
nicer, I'd try to think of some other way to say.