Merge lp:~gmb/maas/node-doc into lp:~maas-committers/maas/trunk
Proposed by
Graham Binns
Status: | Merged | ||||
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Approved by: | Graham Binns | ||||
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Merged at revision: | 2260 | ||||
Proposed branch: | lp:~gmb/maas/node-doc | ||||
Merge into: | lp:~maas-committers/maas/trunk | ||||
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180 lines (+106/-9) 5 files modified
INSTALL.txt (+3/-3) docs/hardware-enablement-kernels.rst (+2/-2) docs/index.rst (+1/-0) docs/installing-ubuntu.rst (+87/-0) docs/nodes.rst (+13/-4) |
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To merge this branch: | bzr merge lp:~gmb/maas/node-doc | ||||
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Reviewer | Review Type | Date Requested | Status |
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Raphaël Badin (community) | Approve | ||
Review via email: mp+215634@code.launchpad.net |
Commit message
Add documentation to cover the fast and default installers. Update existing documentation on nodes to include links to relevant resources (e.g. DHCP configuration), and explain enlistment prerequisites properly.
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Looks good but I've got a couple of remarks:
[0]
11 +To do it in the web user interface, go to the Clusters tab click the
12 +"Import boot images" button at the bottom of the list of cluster
13 +controllers.
I think there is an 'and' missing between 'Clusters tab' and 'click'.
[1]
59 +The default installer ------- ------- --
60 +------
61 +
62 +The default installer installs Ubuntu on a node in exactly the same way
63 +as you would install it manually. Installation is handled by the Debian
64 +installer. Answers to the questions asked by the installer are provided
65 +in a 'preseed' file. For more information on preseed files, see the
66 +:ref:`Additional Configuration <preseed>` page.
We should probably mention that "The default installer" is in fact "the Debian installer." (http:// www.debian. org/devel/ debian- installer/)
[2]
97 +The fast installer is much quicker than the default installer, but has
98 +the disadvantage that it's less easy to configure a node at install
99 +time, since the fast installer doesn't use a :ref:`preseed file
100 +<preseed>`. In addition, the packages that are initially installed on a
101 +fast-installed node need updating manually, since they are part of the
102 +installation image and not downloaded fresh from an apt repository.
For completeness, it's probably worth mentioning curtin with a link to https:/ /launchpad. net/curtin.
[3]
106 +.. [1] Except where the node only supports manual power management.
Is there any kind of real support for that? IIRC there isn't so I'd favor removing that footnote.
[4]
I just noticed that there is a wrong reference of the location of the "Import boot images" button in docs/hardware- enablement- kernels. rst. But I think you are tackling this in a separate branch… mentioning it just in case.
[5]
41 +During deployment, MAAS is responsible for:
Shouldn't this be "Prior to deployment"? It's not entirely clear to me if these steps are part of the "deployment" phase or not. See [6].
[6]
34 +====== ======= ======= ======= ======= === ======= ======= ======= ======= ===
35 +Deploying nodes and installing Ubuntu
36 +======
Looks like installing Ubuntu is *not* part of the deployment phase here…? Also, I'd reverse the sentence "Installing Ubuntu and deploying nodes" since things happen in that order in practice.
[7]
68 +As the name suggests, the default installer is enabled by default for
69 +all new nodes. To enable the default installer for a node that's been
70 +configured to use the fast installer, visit the node's page as an
71 +administrator and click the ``Use the default installer`` button.
and
88 +To enable the fast installer for a node, visit the node's page as an
89 +administrator and click the ``Use the fast installer`` button.
We also have bulk actions for this, it's probably worth mentioning.