Merge lp:~giuseppeterrasi-deactivatedaccount/serverguide/serverguide-review-12-1 into lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/serverguide/precise

Proposed by Giuseppe Terrasi
Status: Merged
Approved by: Peter Matulis
Approved revision: 38
Merged at revision: 38
Proposed branch: lp:~giuseppeterrasi-deactivatedaccount/serverguide/serverguide-review-12-1
Merge into: lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/serverguide/precise
Diff against target: 54 lines (+12/-17)
1 file modified
serverguide/C/lamp-applications.xml (+12/-17)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~giuseppeterrasi-deactivatedaccount/serverguide/serverguide-review-12-1
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Peter Matulis Approve
Review via email: mp+96761@code.launchpad.net

Description of the change

Revision. Reason of changes:
- typo;
- add application tag on tasksel;
- add command tag on lamp-server installation;
- remove a paragraph: add other LAMP application, no overview edit needed;
- remove wiki note: definition is know by users target.

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Peter Matulis (petermatulis) wrote :

Looks good.

review: Approve
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1=== modified file 'serverguide/C/lamp-applications.xml'
2--- serverguide/C/lamp-applications.xml 2012-03-05 19:34:13 +0000
3+++ serverguide/C/lamp-applications.xml 2012-03-09 13:08:51 +0000
4@@ -30,16 +30,23 @@
5 </para>
6
7 <para>
8- The fastest way to get started is to install LAMP using tasksel, tasksel is a Debian/Ubuntu tool that
9- installs multiple related packages as a co-ordinated "task" onto your system.
10+ The fastest way to get started is to install LAMP using <application>tasksel</application>. Tasksel is a Debian/Ubuntu tool that
11+ installs multiple related packages as a co-ordinated "task" onto your system. To install a LAMP server:
12 </para>
13
14+ <procedure>
15+ <step>
16+ <para>
17+ At a terminal prompt enter the following command:
18+ </para>
19 <screen>
20- <command>sudo tasksel install lamp-server</command>
21+<command>sudo tasksel install lamp-server</command>
22 </screen>
23+ </step>
24+ </procedure>
25
26 <para>
27- After installing it you'll be able to install most <emphasis>LAMP</emphasis> applications this way:
28+ After installing it you'll be able to install most <emphasis>LAMP</emphasis> applications in this way:
29 </para>
30
31 <itemizedlist>
32@@ -89,21 +96,9 @@
33 </para>
34
35 <para>
36- This section covers howto install and configure the Wiki applications <application>MoinMoin</application>,
37- <application>MediaWiki</application>, and the MySQL management application <application>phpMyAdmin</application>.
38+ This section covers how to install some <emphasis>LAMP</emphasis> applications.
39 </para>
40
41- <note>
42- <para>
43- A Wiki is a website that allows the visitors to easily add,
44- remove and modify available content easily. The ease of interaction
45- and operation makes Wiki an effective tool for mass collaborative
46- authoring. The term Wiki is also referred to the collaborative
47- software.
48- </para>
49- </note>
50-
51-
52 </sect1>
53 <sect1 id="moinmoin" status="review">
54 <title>Moin Moin</title>

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