Merge lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/xubchanges into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

Proposed by Elfy
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 611
Proposed branch: lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/xubchanges
Merge into: lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu
Diff against target: 33 lines (+6/-3)
2 files modified
slideshows/xubuntu/slides/00_welcome.html (+2/-1)
slideshows/xubuntu/slides/07_thanks.html (+4/-2)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/xubchanges
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Pasi Lallinaho Pending
Review via email: mp+211169@code.launchpad.net

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Remove thanks from slide 1, reword slide 7

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611. By Elfy

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1=== modified file 'slideshows/xubuntu/slides/00_welcome.html'
2--- slideshows/xubuntu/slides/00_welcome.html 2014-02-24 13:46:50 +0000
3+++ slideshows/xubuntu/slides/00_welcome.html 2014-03-15 09:52:53 +0000
4@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
5
6 <div class="main">
7 <div class="content">
8+
9 <p>Congratulations, you have chosen to install Xubuntu 14.04!</p>
10- <p>This exciting piece of software is brought to you free of any fees, for your use and any others you want to share it with.</p>
11+
12 <p>If you are running this installation via the <em>Try Xubuntu</em> option, feel free to examine things as Xubuntu installs. After the installation, the desktop will look much the same as it does now.</p>
13 </div>
14 <img class="shot open" src="images/art_xubuntu.png" />
15
16=== modified file 'slideshows/xubuntu/slides/07_thanks.html'
17--- slideshows/xubuntu/slides/07_thanks.html 2014-03-14 18:04:35 +0000
18+++ slideshows/xubuntu/slides/07_thanks.html 2014-03-15 09:52:53 +0000
19@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@
20
21 <div class="main">
22 <div class="content">
23- <p>Thanks for taking the time with us. We'd love to hear about your experiences with Xubuntu. You can share them on the <a href="https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-users">Xubuntu users mailing list</a>.</p>
24+ <p>We'd love to hear about your experiences with Xubuntu. You can share them on the <a href="https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-users">Xubuntu users mailing list</a>. In the meantime, thanks for taking the time to install Xubuntu with us</p>
25+
26+ <p>Xubuntu will always come without fees; feel free to pass on your installation media and let others try Xubuntu as well.</p>
27
28 <h2>We need your help!</h2>
29- <p>Want to give something back? Find all the different ways to contribute to Xubuntu on the <a href="http://xubuntu.org/devel">Get Involved</a> section of our website.</p>
30+ <p>Want to give something back? The different ways that you can contribute to the Xubuntu community can all be found on the <a href="http://xubuntu.org/devel">Get Involved</a> section of our website.</p>
31 </div>
32 <img class="shot open" src="images/art_community.png" />
33 </div>

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