Ubiquity Slideshow

Merge lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1 into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

  1. slide1
  2. Merge into html
Proposed by Elfy
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 597
Proposed branch: lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1
Merge into: lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu
Diff against target: 22 lines (+3/-3)
1 file modified
slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html (+3/-3)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Pasi Lallinaho Approve
Review via email: mp+210291@code.launchpad.net

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1=== modified file 'slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html'
2--- slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html 2014-02-24 13:46:50 +0000
3+++ slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html 2014-03-10 20:38:21 +0000
4@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
5
6 <div class="main">
7 <div class="content full">
8- <p>In the desktop, you will see some icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p>
9+ <p>On the desktop, you will see icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p>
10 <div class="panel">
11 <img src="images/shot_panel.png" alt="Xubuntu default panel" />
12 </div>
13@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
14 <p class="note">The middle part of the panel is dedicated to window buttons for open applications.</p>
15 </div>
16 <div class="content half">
17- <p class="note">Far in the right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p>
18- <p class="note">Left to the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p>
19+ <p class="note">On the far right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p>
20+ <p class="note">Left of the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p>
21 </div>
22 </div>
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