Merge lp:~dpb/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2 into lp:landscape-bundles

[🤖 Landscape Builder]

Update bundle readme for juju2.

Update bundle readme for juju2.

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40. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[andreas] remove extra |.* at end of link

[Andreas Hasenack (ahasenack)]

Easy comments inline

review: Needs Fixing

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41. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

remove trailing slash on dense deployment.

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

review: Abstain (executing tests)

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

Command: make ci-test
Result: Success
Revno: 41
Branch: lp:~davidpbritton/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2
Jenkins: https://ci.lscape.net/job/latch-test-trusty/1094/

review: Approve (test results)

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

review: Abstain (executing tests)

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

Command: make ci-test
Result: Success
Revno: 41
Branch: lp:~davidpbritton/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2
Jenkins: https://ci.lscape.net/job/latch-test-trusty/1096/

review: Approve (test results)

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42. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[andreas] s/stanza/command/

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

review: Abstain (executing tests)

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

Command: make ci-test
Result: Success
Revno: 42
Branch: lp:~davidpbritton/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2
Jenkins: https://ci.lscape.net/job/latch-test-trusty/1097/

review: Approve (test results)

[lp:~dpb/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2]

43. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

remove deployment links, they were confusing.

[Francis Ginther (fginther)]

Minor comment.

[Francis Ginther (fginther)]

Otherwise +1.

review: Approve

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44. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[chad] s/:/./

[Andreas Hasenack (ahasenack)]

Some suggestions added inline.

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

review: Abstain (executing tests)

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

Command: make ci-test
Result: Success
Revno: 44
Branch: lp:~davidpbritton/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2
Jenkins: https://ci.lscape.net/job/latch-test-trusty/1099/

review: Approve (test results)

[Chad Smith (chad.smith)]

review: Approve

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45. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[andreas] wording changes.

[lp:~dpb/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2]

46. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[bbsw] period after link.

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

review: Abstain (executing tests)

[Andreas Hasenack (ahasenack)]

+1, just one nit/grammar.

review: Approve

[🤖 Landscape Builder (landscape-builder)]

Command: make ci-test
Result: Success
Revno: 46
Branch: lp:~davidpbritton/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2
Jenkins: https://ci.lscape.net/job/latch-test-trusty/1100/

review: Approve (test results)

[lp:~dpb/landscape-bundles/readme-update-juju2]

47. By David Britton on 2017-03-29

[andreas] s/this/This/, and period.

=== modified file 'README.md'
--- README.md	2015-10-14 13:38:20 +0000
+++ README.md	2017-03-29 20:57:27 +0000
@@ -1,28 +1,22 @@
 Overview
 ========
 
-This branch contains the necessary config and instructions for using
-juju-deployer/juju-quickstart to deploy the landscape charm.
-
-Deployment should be straightforward.
+This bundle will deploy [Landscape On-Premises](https://landscape.canonical.com/landscape-features).
+There are three slightly different versions of this bundle, explained below.
 
 Dense Deployment - MAAS
 =======================
-For MAAS where LXCs can be addressed externally, you can deploy to a single
-machine while at the same time making the service scalable in the future:
-
-  juju quickstart u/landscape/landscape-dense-maas/
+`landscape-dense-maas` - For MAAS where LXDs can be addressed externally, you
+can deploy to a single machine while at the same time making the service
+scalable in the future.
 
 Dense Deployment - Other
 ========================
-For other substrates, use the plain dense deployment which allows your
-landscape server to be fully reachable, but will not allow easy scaling
-should load increase.
-
-  juju quickstart u/landscape/landscape-dense/
+`landscape-dense` - For other machine providers where LXD containers do not get
+externally routable IP addresses. This will deploy the frontend on the machine
+itself, and the remaining backend services in containers. This approach is not
+currently scalable to another physical system but conserves resources.
 
 Scalable Deployment
 ===================
-For a truly scalable deployment, the following stanza should be used.
-
-  juju quickstart u/landscape/landscape-scalable
+`landscape-scalable` - A fully scalable multi-machine deployment.