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| Andrew Starr-Bochicchio (andrewsomething) wrote | # |
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This paragraph, well really run-on sentence, really reads like an old text based RPG. "You enter the room. On your left you find a piece of software." Since we're editing it anyway, let's try to improve it a bit while we're at it. How about something more like:
While there are thousands of packages in the Ubuntu archive, there are still a lot we haven't gotten to yet. If there is an exciting new piece of software that you feel needs wider exposure, maybe you want to try your hand at creating a package for Ubuntu or a PPA. This guide will take you through the steps of packaging new software.