Code review comment for lp:~camptocamp/stock-logistic-warehouse/7.0-improve_stock_location_ownership-afe
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| Sandy Carter (http://www.savoirfairelinux.com) (sandy-carter) wrote | # |
review:
Needs Fixing
(grammar)
Grammar mistakes in the description
l.11 instances should be plural
This is useful for instance
This is useful for instances
l.12 comma after case
In which case a possible workflow
In which case, a possible workflow
l.12 run on sentence, consider breaking into two
In which case, a possible workflow
could be that the company is allowed to use that stock, but this would generate
a purchase order for the real owner of the stock, with or without direct
delivery.
In which case, a possible workflow
could be that the company is allowed to use that stock. This would generate
a purchase order for the real owner of the stock, with or without direct
delivery.