Merge ~awe/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/network-manager:cellular-doc-improvements into ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/network-manager:master
Proposed by
Tony Espy
Status: | Approved |
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Approved by: | Alfonso Sanchez-Beato |
Approved revision: | 8564e8c552e843a106a68f94b5852d2c46649b34 |
Proposed branch: | ~awe/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/network-manager:cellular-doc-improvements |
Merge into: | ~snappy-hwe-team/snappy-hwe-snaps/+git/network-manager:master |
Diff against target: |
96 lines (+21/-15) 1 file modified
docs/configure-cellular-connections.md (+21/-15) |
Related bugs: |
Reviewer | Review Type | Date Requested | Status |
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Alfonso Sanchez-Beato | Approve | ||
System Enablement Bot | continuous-integration | Needs Fixing | |
Konrad Zapałowicz (community) | code | Needs Fixing | |
Review via email: mp+336947@code.launchpad.net |
Description of the change
Improvements to the cellular configuration page based on customer feedback.
Also updated the page to use "you" instead "we", per our style guide, and made some other minor corrections to the wording.
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double spaces, everything else ok