Merge lp:~aaronhoneycutt/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/cosmic into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu

Proposed by Aaron Honeycutt
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 833
Proposed branch: lp:~aaronhoneycutt/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/cosmic
Merge into: lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu
Diff against target: 70 lines (+13/-9)
4 files modified
slideshows/kubuntu/slides/00_Welcome.html (+3/-2)
slideshows/kubuntu/slides/01_Applications.html (+1/-1)
slideshows/kubuntu/slides/03_Get-Help.html (+4/-1)
slideshows/kubuntu/slides/04_Get-Involved.html (+5/-5)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~aaronhoneycutt/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/cosmic
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Jean-Baptiste Lallement Pending
Simon Quigley Pending
Review via email: mp+355892@code.launchpad.net

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improve kubuntu slideshow with periods, sentence change, and added sentence.

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830. By Aaron Honeycutt

another grammar fix

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1=== modified file 'slideshows/kubuntu/slides/00_Welcome.html'
2--- slideshows/kubuntu/slides/00_Welcome.html 2018-04-22 05:56:33 +0000
3+++ slideshows/kubuntu/slides/00_Welcome.html 2018-09-30 20:26:19 +0000
4@@ -9,7 +9,8 @@
5
6 <div class="main" id="center-text">
7 <p>Thanks for picking Kubuntu!</p>
8- <p>Kubuntu combines the best of the KDE Community's software with Ubuntu's base to make a great desktop experience</p>
9- <p>This slideshow will go over the default applications, how to get help, and how to contribute to Kubuntu</p>
10+ <p>Kubuntu combines the best of the KDE Community's software with Ubuntu's base to make a great desktop experience.</p>
11+ <p>This slideshow will go over the default applications, how to get help, and how to contribute to Kubuntu.</p>
12+ <p>Some of the listed applications are only included in the default installation option.</p>
13 </div>
14 </div>
15
16=== modified file 'slideshows/kubuntu/slides/01_Applications.html'
17--- slideshows/kubuntu/slides/01_Applications.html 2018-04-22 05:56:33 +0000
18+++ slideshows/kubuntu/slides/01_Applications.html 2018-09-30 20:26:19 +0000
19@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
20
21 <div class="main" id="full-text">
22 <p>Kubuntu comes with most of the applications that you need on a daily basis.</p>
23- <p>For everything else, you can install more software in Discover, our software center</p>
24+ <p>For everything else, you can install more software in Discover, our software center.</p>
25 <table>
26 <tr>
27 <td>
28
29=== modified file 'slideshows/kubuntu/slides/03_Get-Help.html'
30--- slideshows/kubuntu/slides/03_Get-Help.html 2018-04-22 05:56:33 +0000
31+++ slideshows/kubuntu/slides/03_Get-Help.html 2018-09-30 20:26:19 +0000
32@@ -13,7 +13,10 @@
33 Let us know about your Kubuntu experience at <a href="http://www.kubuntu.org/community">Kubuntu Community</a>!</p>
34 <p>In addition to our extensive written help, the Kubuntu
35 community in conjunction with the Ubuntu community, provides free
36- technical support in person and over the Internet. Learn more at <a href="http://www.kubuntu.org/support">Kubuntu Support</a>.
37+ technical support in person and over the Internet. </p>
38+
39+ <p>Learn more at <a href="http://www.kubuntu.org/support">Kubuntu Support</a>.</p>
40+ <p>
41 <ul>
42 <li>Kubuntu Community: <a href="https://www.kubuntu.org/community">http://www.kubuntu.org/community</a></li>
43 <li>Kubuntu Support: <a href="https://www.kubuntu.org/support">http://www.kubuntu.org/support</a></li>
44
45=== modified file 'slideshows/kubuntu/slides/04_Get-Involved.html'
46--- slideshows/kubuntu/slides/04_Get-Involved.html 2018-04-22 05:56:33 +0000
47+++ slideshows/kubuntu/slides/04_Get-Involved.html 2018-09-30 20:26:19 +0000
48@@ -9,17 +9,17 @@
49
50 <div class="main" id="center-text">
51 <p>
52- The Kubuntu community consists of a group of individuals, who
53+ The Kubuntu community consists of a group of individuals who
54 made up one of the greatest teams in the open source community,
55 working on various aspects of the distribution, providing advice and
56 technical support, as well as helping to promote Kubuntu to a wider
57 audience.
58 </p>
59 <p>
60- No matter your skill level, getting involved and helping to
61- mold the future of Kubuntu is easy, and you are more than welcome
62- to help out.Remember, it is easy to get involved and the work you
63- do will be seen by millions of people around the world.
64+ No matter your skill level, getting involved and helping to mold
65+ the future of Kubuntu is easy, and you are more than welcome to help out.
66+ The work you do will be seen by millions of people around the world.
67+
68 </p>
69 <p>
70 The installation will finish soon. We hope you enjoy Kubuntu!

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