Comment 8 for bug 572016

I've used nstenz's patch with some of Jay's suggestions. I agree with the comma and semicolon changes. I put periods on the ends of all the user visible statements; I tend to agree they look like they need them. I chose to say 'several minutes' instead of 'few minutes' since fsck's can sometimes take a significant amount of time.

I think there is a good point made that 'disk drive' seems jargonish, but 'disk' and 'drive' have non-computer meanings that I could imagine being confused ("What; has my computer turned into a chiropractor?") I've opted to leave that change out and retain 'disk drive' for now; it could use further discussion in a new bug report, though.